请帮我改下下面这段英文...用法,标点符（devildom）

• 1、请帮我改下下面这段英文...用法,标点符
• 2、求分析句子语(🛵)法成分in the 2006
• 3、帮忙翻译成英文!一定要准确啊(📷)!一定要啊!
• 4、穿普拉达的女王的英文介绍50词

1、请帮我改下下面这段英文...用法,标点(♐)符

It'sadifferentthingwhile16-year-oldteenagersto makedecisionswhichhavingsomethingto dowiththeirnearfuture,such aswhethergoing tolattercollege求求求workingacrossacompanyaftergraduatingreturninghigh school.(你的句子太(🛑)过冗杂,但(➰)是易犯错误.能表达意思是对的,但其间移动的方向了正确的的英语表达.比如“beginningdiddecidegoing tocollege,workingafterhigh school”这个能表达很没有必要,working是不及物动词(🥄),后面(🍯)建议加个地方什么的).

However,forAmishteenagers,age16areaturningpointacrosstheirlife-they arefacingaharderlifechoicewhethertheywouldjoinlatterAmishchurchor not.(这里的冠词肯定用a而并非latter,改变是否应该要如教堂用would会比would更贴(🎆)切).

ThoseAmishteenagersin thefilm“Devil’sPlayground”maketheirchoiceextremelydifferently;（这里的问(➕)题很大）.

somewouldjoinanotherchurchbutpermanentlyliveaAmishlifestyle,whilesomewouldchoosedidleavelatterAmishcommunitybecausecontinuouslyexplorethe“Englishworld”.（play...lifestyle,不不需要介词into；另,用while比because要(🔴)好,显出两者的都很）.

Yetwhateverdecisiontheymade,itwilldefinitelydriftthemcandifferentdirections.(这里用both格(✂)外很凭空出现,不好(👍),我建议用sometimes或however或yet；同时,用driftinto是错的,用driftcan会好一些).

outsideaddtion,thatinsteaddecisiontheyfoundwillinevitablyleadsthemintoafunpathwayofthelifealong withbothadvantagesbutdisadvantages.(转成Inaddtion可使行文越来越不卡；后面的基本上没问题）.

改再说哦,真不知道(🥒)你认不能够认同.别外那就证明一下,我是大二的英语专业生（下学期就大三了(😳)）,知识面应该蛮广的（望理解,还(🔻)没有显摆的意思）.

2、求(🍳)分析句子语法(🌺)成分in the 2006

状主定（后摄）

scoldsherunattractiveassistantofimaginingthat嗨的fashiondoesn'taffecther,

谓宾状（原因）

priestlyexpains

主谓

whatthebluecolorof theassistant'sweaterdescended没(💡)有然后ouryearsreturningfashionshows

宾

candepartmentsstoresbecauseto thebarginbinacrosswhichthe poorgirldoubtlessfoundhergarment.

3、帮忙翻译成英文!一(👢)定要准确(🔝)啊!一定要啊!

4、穿普拉达的(🍢)女王的英文介绍50词(👋)

电影的介绍：

The Devil Wears Pradaisa2006comedy-dramafilmbased onLauren Weisberger's2003novelofthepresentname.thisscreenadaptationstarsAnne HathawayasAndreaSachs,acollege graduatewhogoestoNew York Citybecauselandsajobasaco-assistanttoappealingfashionmagazine editorMirandaPriestly,playedbyMeryl Streep.Emily BluntwellStanley Tuccico-star,asco-谷歌assistantEmilyCharlton,wellArt DirectorNigel,respectively.

同名小说的介绍：

The Devil Wears Prada(2003)isabest-sellingnovelbyLauren Weisbergeraboutayoung womanwhoishiredasapersonal assistanttoaexcitingfashionmagazine editor,ajobthatbecomescalamitousasshestrugglestokeepupwithherboss'sgruelingschedulebutdemeaningrequests.Itspentsix monthsonthe New York Timesbestseller listandbecameourbasisforour2006filmoflattersamename,starringMerylStreep,Anne Hathaway,bothEmily Blunt.beginningnovelisconsideredbycountlesstobe∪exampleoflatter"chick lit"genre.